How To Get A in This Class

To get an A in the writing class it's not a easy job,there has lots of tips we have to follow it.Besides, we need prepare many thing in our brain before we start to write.If we can do all of the correct steps of writing,and then, we can be a good auother one day.In writing process,frist is preparation,it means pre-writing, inculding brain-storming.mind-mapping and listing the keywords.The frist steps is the keypoint of your writing,if we have a clear mind mapping and list the words we need that we can write our article very influencely.Seconed,we have to organizing,that is outlining,we should write down the topic sentence frist and then we need supporting sentence to support it,topic sentence is the soul of an article,because it can let the reader know what you want to talk about.at least,we need concluding sentence to make the end.Howere,we still need edting(peer edting),to checking grammar and rhetorics ,it can help us to find out the error in the article and make the article better.Finally,the step is revising,that is proof reading and summarizing.It is also important to revise the article after finished the article.because it can let the writing process more complete.Frankly speaking, to get an A in the writing class it can be hard and it can be easy too.all we have to do is to follow all the tips and process correctly.and practice as possible as we can.and then we can handle this class very well.

Which do you like? Traveling alone or in group

In my opinion, I prefer traveling in group, because in the foreign country, must be very unfamiliar to that place, and must be have lots of interesting thing that I met today want to share with somebody. so, I think traveling in group in better than alone.Frankly speaking. traveling alone has lots of dangerous. it’s not safe when we in others county alone. If we traveling with a group, everybody can take care each other, and construct a communicate web, its safe and convenient. Besides. I think traveling in group can share whole thing which had been happened in this trip, it will have more fun than alone.Hence, traveling in group has lots of advantage, we can make new friends, chatting together or shopping together. Therefore, it won’t feel lonesome in the foreign country.All in all, I prefer traveling in group, I think people can live without friends, it also can’t have no company in a trip, lots of people will make the traveling more fun!

In Mandy's Coffee

"In Mandy’s coffee shop"It’s November 7, a cloudy day. The winds brow softly and makes me feel comfortable. I was sitting by the window at Mandy’s coffee shop. Every sign out of the window is beautiful and let me addict on it. It's at 7:00 in the morning, there are only a few people in this coffee shop, maybe it’s the weather makes people want to sleep all the day.
And, I’d like to spend this time to enjoy my life. Then, then there was a woman coming in and wearing sunglasses of DIOR. I think she might be an actor or famous person. She set down and orders a cup of coffee. She puts lots of sugar into the cup.
Then she tastes it, seems like it wasn't sweet enough. She puts more and more sugar into her coffee. At that time, she was really scared me. Her favor it’s very strange and I believed the coffee she had it’s not delicious.
However, I have a perfect meal and nice coffee, I enjoy this moment very much, I were watching the magazine when another people coming. There comes a woman with a little infant, her baby crying out loud and made meupset. So, I finished my meal and coffee soon and left Mandy’s coffee shop in a bad moon.